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RSOM Pg 5

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(I put this under digital since overall the toning was done on the computer, inking was all done by hand though. With a pen and not a waccom tablet)

My second attempt to RSOM 8. In the rush of ambition, lack of communication with my layout partner over the course of 5 months I somehow rolled this out in two weeks. Compared my last year's entry (which was the same basic story/premise just tweaked) I think my art and story telling came a long way. There is still some to be learned and more to do to be satisfied with myself and perhaps time to just tell a different story to at least get my foot in the door. The flow to this one was a bit easier, I grasped the paneling/toning much better giving me a cleaner look and less grainy as before.

I am open for constructive criticism, and overall thoughts. This is a story I have been working on for at least 5 or 6 years now, so it has progressed since the first time the story ever popped in my head. I've been diligent about wanting to work with it since, but as stated before perhaps to get your foot in the door I should try something else next go around. This was another test, and at least showed me how much I have improved since last year and how much I can accomplish in a short time. I know what I am capable of which should always lead to that determination and persistence. Thank you.

RSOM PG 1: [link]
RSOM PG 2: [link]
RSOM PG 3: [link]
RSOM PG 4: [link]

Please do not use or distribute this on other sites. This is all original story and art done by me.

Layout Artist/Story: Nancy Guevara
Artist/Story/Inking/Toning: Lauren Christensen
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DestinieKirby's avatar
Nice dialogue page. The light to dark gradient is a good touch.